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  “……”蓉蓉举起了手,“老师,这里有一个问题少女。”
  没有老师出现。
  “咦?老师呢?”蓉蓉环顾四周,大吃一惊,“不仅是老师,其他人呢?怎么都不见了?难道……我们现在进入了学校里世界,即将探索发生在这所学校的成年秘事。1923年,学校由一个富商创立,投资上百万,然而,请来的包工头为了私吞很多的钱财,拖欠农民工的工资。愤怒的农民工将包工头叫到了学校新建的天台上……”
  杨科道:“因为已经放学了,其他人都走了。”
  “……为什么没有人早告诉我的!”
  “一起回家吧。”
  两个少女走在放学后空空荡荡的走廊里,不远处食堂传来的打闹声冲散了因空无一人带来的寂静氛围。
  春天快要过去了,春天的花和夏天的草在楼下的花坛里茂盛地生长着。
  “蓉蓉,我喜欢你。”
  “啊?啊?我又在幻想了吗?冰红茶呢?”蓉蓉习惯性地伸手摸自己的鼻子,却没有摸到。
  手被杨科拉住了。
  “是现实。我喜欢你。”
  “……”蓉蓉全身的血液都冲到了脸上。
  这是一个阴谋,她想。
  一切都太美好了。邻后座的冷傲学霸,因为莫名其妙的科幻原因和自己产生了关联,温馨友爱的校园日常,努力之后获得的进步和同步收获的爱情。
  “刚才收到了一个月来最好的电磁波。”杨科看着表说道。
  “啊?”
  “今晚八点来我家。”
  “啊?”
  “我说,今晚八点来我家。你合格了。”
  “什么合格?作为你的女朋友吗?”
  “……作为超电磁炮发射员。”
  “啊?”
  “可以发射超电磁炮了。”
  “啊?”
  披着科幻皮行着日常之实的日子,到此为止。

  某不科学的超电磁炮

  In the ld and plain living room; Matt is sitting in his chair。 His eyes don’t shine anymore。 He looks extremely old and weak。 Today is his birthday; and he is by himself。 The only thing that he has been doing all day is thinking about how sad and lonely his life is。 As he was looking at some old pictures; he found one special with him and his friends from llege。 This picture brought back the days when he had friends and his life was full of happiness。 Also; it brought him a sad memory。 This memory happened forty years ago; during his last year of llege。
  Throughout llege; Matt had a friend named Mark。 Mark was tall and skinny。 He wore thick glasses。 He was shy; smart and responsible。 Also; Mark didn’t have as many friends as Matt had。 He nsidered Matt as his best friend。 As good friends; they knew everything about each other; and they hung out。 Also; they overcame many problems together。 They were really good friends。
  On his twenty…fourth birthday their life changed。 On the night before his birthday; Mark called Matt; “Hi! Matt;” his voice sounded strange。 He ntinued; “ I have an important project to work on。 I’m having some problem with this。 Maybe; you uld e over and help me with it giving me some new ideas。 uld you” Matt asked; “What time” Mark kept in silence for a minute; and then he said; “At 8 pm。 Is it good for you” Then Matt answered; “OK! See you later。” At that night; it was Matt’s birthday。 So; he didn’t want to spend his birthday helping Mark with his project。 Matt went to a club with some other guys。
  The next morning; Matt noticed that Mark was acting differently。 When he went to talk to Mark; Mark ignored him pletely。 He left the classroom without saying one word。 As Mark was walking away; Matt said in an angry voice; “You are selfish。 You are just thinking about yourself。 I was having fun on my birthday。 Why can’t you understand it”
  标准答案
  One possible version
  While he was saying it; Mallory; one of his classmates and friend; stood up and started to say; “How can you say such thing to Mark You don’t know what happened! Last night; he called you many times; but he didn’t get any answer from you。 He worried about what was going wrong with you。 He took his car and drove all night looking for you。 He looked at the hospital; the jail; and bars ……” Matt started to apologize to Mallory and to himself; saying; “Why did he do it He uld work on the project by himself; and ……” At that time Mallory spoke angrily; “Shut up! He had prepared a surprise birthday party for you; and we waited for you or for a call all night long。”
  Tears fell from his eyes。 Matt didn’t know what to say or what to do。 Before he said anything; Mallory had left the classroom。 He sat down and stayed there for a long time。 He looked around the classroom。 It was ld and plain without his friends。 It was empty; just like his living room now。

  极夜轨迹

  Steve; a twelve…year…old boy; was about to be lost forever ; by the U。S。 education system。 Remarkably; he uld read; yet; in spite of his reading skills; Steve was failing。 He had been failing since first grade; as he was passed on from grade to grade。 Steve was a big boy; looking more like a teenager than a twelve year old; yet; Steve went unnoticed…… until Miss White。
  Miss White was a smiling; young; beautiful redhead; and Steve was in love! For the first time in his young life; he uldn’t take his eyes off his teacher; yet; still he failed。 He never did his homework; and he was always in trouble with Miss White。 His heart would break under her sharp words; and when he was punished for failing to turn in his homework; he felt just miserable! Still; he did not study。
  In the middle of the first semester of school; the entire seventh grade was tested for basic skills。 Steve hurried through his tests; and ntinued to dream of other things; as the day wore on。 His heart was not in school; but in the woods; where he often escaped alone; trying to shut out the sights; sounds and smells of his alholic home。 No one checked on him to see if he was safe。 No one knew he was gone; because no one was sober(清醒的) enough to care。 Oddly; Steve never missed a day of school。
  One day; Miss White’s impatient voice broke into his daydreams。 “Steve!!” Startled; he turned to look at her。
  “Pay attention!”
  Steve locked his gaze on Miss White with adolescent adoration (青春期的爱慕); as she began to go over the test results for the seventh grade。
  “You all did pretty well;” she told the class; “except for one boy; and it breaks my heart to tell you this; but……” She hesitated; pinning Steve to his seat with a sharp stare; her eyes searching his face。
  “……The smartest boy in the seventh grade is failing my class!”
  She just stared at Steve; as the class spun around for a good look。 Steve dropped his eyes and carefully examined his fingertips。
  After that; it was war!! Steve still wouldn’t do his homework。 Even as the punishments became more severe; he remained stubborn。
  “Just try it! ONE WEEK!” He was unmoved。
  “You’re smart enough! You’ll see a change!” Nothing fazed him。
  “Give yourself a chance! Don’t give up on your life!” Nothing。
  “Steve! Please! I care about you!”
  Wow! Suddenly; Steve got it!! Someone cared about him? Someone; totally unattainable and perfect; CARED ABOUT HIM??!!
  Steve went home from school; thoughtful; that afternoon。 Walking into the house; he took one look around。 Both parents were passed out; in various stages of undress; and the stench(恶臭) was overpowering! He; quickly; gathered up his camping gear; a jar of peanut butter; a loaf of bread; a bottle of water; and this time……his schoolbooks。 Grim faced and determined; he headed for the woods。
  The following Monday he arrived at school on time; and he waited for Miss White to enter the classroom。 She walked in; all sparkle and smiles! God; she was beautiful! He yearned for her smile to turn on him。
  满分25分
  paragraph 1:
  It did not。
  Miss White; immediately; gave a quiz on the weekend homework。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
  paragraph 2:
  He disvered that he uld understand and retain knowledge; ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

  极夜轨迹

  ……… the first chapter………
  原版(正经的)故事梗概:从前有一个十二岁的学渣名叫史蒂夫,他懒得学习更懒得做作业。尽管他身高很高(外表很显眼的意思),但仍然没人注意他。直到有一天……一个姓白的老师(怀特吧喂!)来到了他的班级。
  那一天,史蒂夫感觉自己恋爱了。
  ……然而恋爱什么的并没有什么卵用,他依然是个怠惰的差生。有一次考试他考得异常�
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